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Abram Pinnington's avatar

You're not a wimp. Respecting country that can kill you two different ways isn't weakness, it's just paying attention. The people whose constitution you admire didn't skip the part you're standing in. They stood there until it stopped feeling like a stranger, same as you're doing now. That's not a lesser version of their toughness. It's the early chapter of it.

Also, selfishly, I'd trade a lot for a Montana night sky like the one over your place. I love the dark out there more than just about anything, and a real one, no town glow, nothing but the whole spilled mess of it overhead, is getting harder to come by. You've got dog days and a dog star to look up at. Not a bad consolation for the wind.

Maddie Mason's avatar

This is one of my favorite pieces of yours. Beautifully written. I was picturing a woman's skirt and hair flowing over the landscape, eating up more and more of the land, as your writing went on.

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